I Take a Dip
The lakes I knoware all seen throughwindows or sheathsof brain, pseudo-eyesthat record dreams and memories.We visit Lake Winnipega weekday afternoon.We stand on the boardwalkin our traditional...
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I can relate to this on many levels, Don.First, being an avid swimmer, I know how that feeling of going under brings back the very first times of learning how to swim or just "going under".Secondly,...
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This is cool, Don."with one insistence of his arm.I am in the water lettingthe cold lake remind me."My favorite lines. They do possess a kind of magic, don't they. Enjoyed.
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Thanks Bronxite (I was born in your borough back in 1940). The phrase has to be "who" because its a human being, never referred to as "that."Thanks Res.--Don
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Hi Don-What if you cut back on some of the "I" here?This would be a much smoother trip to the end.Otherwise, nice work.Peace,Yoly
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